I like this a lot... Very creative.

Wow: beautiful rhythm, imagery, and emotion all wrapped up into one poem. This is really good stuff.

I would love opinions from a writer like yourself on my work, it would mean a lot to me!

are you kidding me I can't top reviews like that. :(

well... If I HAD to say something mean... It would most likely be...

She is spinning(,)

whirling(,)

twirling(,)

jj not really it would take away from a liberating well written poem. So keep at it

faeries is what comes to mind. i like how you used alot of nature in your poem.

~Autumn~

interesting but its good all the same.

Beautiful imagrey, awesome write.

I like the subtle rhythm in this...

She is spinning

Whirling

Twirling

this is an awesome line. A great poem; keep writing!

It brings to mind beautiful pre-Raphaelite art.

I liked this...kinda a nice picture in my head..sort of what you would expect for a drawing on a box of tea really. o_O lol good job.

i love how you describe her and how the world acts around her (or should i say the twigs :P). this reminds me of a series by terry brooks. its called the landover series and i think you would enjoy that very much. well done, you deserve a star *

Beautiful imagrey very nice. ever consider publication?

Wonderful job,

~Sejse~

Beautiful! Nice descriptions.

Oh this is so beautiful. The imagery and description was amazing. Nice work.

Eep. This is really good too. Once again I love the imagery! Fantastic!

this is so pretty, lovely descriptions.