Reviews for She Thought She Knew Him
flameofcarrie chapter 1 . 1/29/2006
I like the message of this poem, but there's some internal problems. The repetiveness of 'She thought she knew him' should have defined a rhythm, but it really ddin't. It seemed to vary given the line, which really isn't good.

And the line 'he raped and murdererd her' seemed to be too many syllables; rewording it might help this poem.

Overall though, a pretty good job.