Reviews for Something Borrow
Prodigee123 chapter 6 . 10/9/2013
okay, hes still a doof how the heck is the reason why hes still with peytons sister logical!
Prodigee123 chapter 3 . 10/9/2013
why does she keep blaming herself, my gosh the guy is a doof, why is he flirting with her when he is obviously with her sister. Really dislike him right now.
horse4ever chapter 6 . 11/30/2010
the story is really good, plz write more
Ms. Sweaters chapter 6 . 9/16/2010
I just think that this is a lovely story, you have created characters I can relate to and even fall for a little and it makes me sad that it has stopped. but I am really glad I read it I think that you are a talented story teller and I hope some day that you continue this
Rock The Rain chapter 6 . 3/22/2010
I really wish you'd update. This story is amazing. :)
GirlWithTheDancingCherryTrees chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
im sorry, but if i did a scan over, all i truly saw were just a bunch of unnecessary: "..." its a good story so far and plot, but there isnt one sentence i see without: "..." there are commas, or periods.

"You look very nice! you've got the requisite tan, your hair it's very pretty and streaked through with golden color against your own dark brown... I really like it...", she was saying as she walked around and around me, her finger against her lips. "Jeez Sis, I feel like a mannequin on display… cut it out!"

its...funny. im sorry if it seems like im criticizing or simply flaming and hating your story, but i sincerely dont. it seems cool, and i would love to continue to read more, but i just find it strange.
yayawhynot89 chapter 6 . 1/18/2008
WOW! MORE PLEASE? :D I love this lol
Usuallyhappy chapter 3 . 4/5/2007
Omg I adored this chapter! I honestly thought it was brilliant! It made me really relate to Peyton and it envoked so many different emotions within me! I think i may have cried at the dinner party bit just because I know that thats exactly what its like in my own family. Please keep on writing, it gives all us brain sisters hope that there is a happy ending for us too. PLEASE KEEP WRITING.

Usuallyhappy chapter 1 . 4/5/2007
Good chapter I can already see I'm going to like this fiction x
fnnyjnny1414 chapter 6 . 1/12/2007
OH THANK GOD! i Thought you ended the story! But no! YAY! Cant wait for the next chappie!

Juniper Nights chapter 6 . 2/14/2006
dOrKy-GuRl03 chapter 6 . 2/7/2006
hey gurl...thath was a very good chapter...just glad that they finally tell their feeling to each other...well anyways keep updating loving it...just can't wait the next chapter to post...need to head out peace out then...
crazylady4 chapter 6 . 2/7/2006
this is great
LadyWriter chapter 6 . 2/6/2006
I liked the way you wrote this chapter. Awesome job!
xbendxbreakx chapter 6 . 2/6/2006
Uh oh! I think Devon seems fake. He stayed with Britney so long for nothing. Jerk. I guess they both sort of used each other. I think I like Ian better too- Devon confuses her.

I love this story, can't wait for more ]
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