okay, hes still a doof how the heck is the reason why hes still with peytons sister logical!

why does she keep blaming herself, my gosh the guy is a doof, why is he flirting with her when he is obviously with her sister. Really dislike him right now.

the story is really good, plz write more

I just think that this is a lovely story, you have created characters I can relate to and even fall for a little and it makes me sad that it has stopped. but I am really glad I read it I think that you are a talented story teller and I hope some day that you continue this

I really wish you'd update. This story is amazing. :)

im sorry, but if i did a scan over, all i truly saw were just a bunch of unnecessary: "..." its a good story so far and plot, but there isnt one sentence i see without: "..." there are commas, or periods.

"You look very nice! you've got the requisite tan, your hair it's very pretty and streaked through with golden color against your own dark brown... I really like it...", she was saying as she walked around and around me, her finger against her lips. "Jeez Sis, I feel like a mannequin on display… cut it out!"

its...funny. im sorry if it seems like im criticizing or simply flaming and hating your story, but i sincerely dont. it seems cool, and i would love to continue to read more, but i just find it strange.

WOW! MORE PLEASE? :D I love this lol

Omg I adored this chapter! I honestly thought it was brilliant! It made me really relate to Peyton and it envoked so many different emotions within me! I think i may have cried at the dinner party bit just because I know that thats exactly what its like in my own family. Please keep on writing, it gives all us brain sisters hope that there is a happy ending for us too. PLEASE KEEP WRITING.

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Good chapter I can already see I'm going to like this fiction x

OH THANK GOD! i Thought you ended the story! But no! YAY! Cant wait for the next chappie!

KICKASS SEXY STORY! man props.

interesting

hey gurl...thath was a very good chapter...just glad that they finally tell their feeling to each other...well anyways keep updating girl..so loving it...just can't wait the next chapter to post...need to head out then...so peace out then...

this is great

I liked the way you wrote this chapter. Awesome job!

Uh oh! I think Devon seems fake. He stayed with Britney so long for nothing. Jerk. I guess they both sort of used each other. I think I like Ian better too- Devon confuses her.

I love this story, can't wait for more ]