Reviews for Venus on your tongue, Medusa
Isca chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
First, whoever said 'you'll amount to anything' and such in a previous review, is ridiculous.

You're a great writer! :)

I loved the last line where she reveals that her name is 'Rose.' That was awesome :) Great imagery throughout!
bittersweet.season chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
beautiful

the last line was gorgeous
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
this is funny yet sad. loved the title. wonder what inspired you to write this. thanks for sharing.
this is britt chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
ravishing. love the last two lines so much, especially the choice of how you ended it.
eldrin chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
Excellent. It almost ends with a laugh.
Sythiro chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
That is your view! Which I do appreciate!
Just Luke Staden chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
a great poem and i loved it. i cant see why any body would say it was shit. so remove that reveiw from darkMCRchic6. whoever it was they dont know what the FUCK they were talking about. again it was a great great poem. keep up the great work

ps i need a word better than great:)
mmmmmmmm chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
Wow. I'm not...entirely sure why this strikes me so strongly, but nevertheless, it's beautiful. More so than I can really express, and very unique.
Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
Sometimes it's so confusing, but it just makes your poetry even more charming, all the mystery and amiguousness (is that a word?)...like their relationship anyway ;). Btw, 'sup with some people who review you...the ass writing 'this is shit..' i mean, what's the point? if ppl don't like your work, why waste their time on pointless, useless flames...you're an awesome author and clearly you'll amount to a lot! Love, Mia
Kusje chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
I loved this as well.

It really captures the true nature of such a kind of love.. and well, you get what i mean?

:3

great job once again!
darkMCRchic666 chapter 1 . 2/13/2006
This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything. This is PURE SHIT as always. You are fuck and will NEVER amount to anything.
HellHeartedlyBent chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
pretty images, as always. not so stunning as the rest of your work, but we cant expect perfection every time can we?
In State of Agony chapter 1 . 2/3/2006
hey thanx 4 the review i really like that u give ur point of view but...i cant change the way i write ofcurse i can change the spellings/grammar mistakes BUT in some lines u reed before i just like it the way they are, i dont care if sounds sloppy...thats my style thats all, and i express myself that way, some lines may have no sence but i like how the sound, i like that some lines dont have sence at all...i already make some changes, thanx 4 the critics
Nicole Michele chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
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simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
i love the mixture of the person & the garden in that last line.. the whole concept is sad and very true... well done
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