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Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
Gefällt mir sehr gut, vor allem die doppelte Bedeutung von "Reflections".

Was die Haikus betrifft, hast du natürlich recht. Dieses 575 ist ein Mißverständnis. Die japanische Sprache funktioniert ganz andern
Femme de Dieu chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
THANK YOU! for pointing out that in English we do not have to strictly abide by 5-7-5. I had a very short poem, Mariposa, and I altered it to fit 5-7-5 because someone told me it'd make a great haiku if I did that. But I feel it lost some of its beauty in so doing. Now that I've read this, I may go repost it in its original form.

Your work is amazing. The shorter the poetic form, the more talented one has to be to get across the complete mood and meaning. You are very talented in doing so. Your site is a great place to go to "learn" how to write this wondrous form of expression...

Thanks again...T/P
Olivine chapter 7 . 1/8/2006
-sigh- i dont even think there are any more words to describe this...oh, wait, i'll go find a thesaurus...okay, heres a word! exquisite! yes, very exquisite! except, now i feel sortof old because im using that word. oh, well. thats the truth! keep on thinking outside the box! and keep on writing ~~Wintertigress
Luthiena o Lorien chapter 7 . 1/8/2006
Oh, very nice. But, for some reason, I seem to be picking up a slightly bitter tone, though I'm not sure that that is what you intended...
likes to headbang chapter 6 . 1/6/2006
the imagery in each one is beautiful... nice job
Olivine chapter 6 . 1/6/2006
b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l. beautiful. what more can i say? keep on thining outside the box, and, ofcourse, keep on writing. ~~Wintertigress
Olivine chapter 5 . 1/5/2006
omg, awesomely awesome. really. i know a lot of writers who wouldve just said 'the blue sky', instead of 'dew's carpet'. and then 'vaporized by dawn'...yea. truly outside the box, keep writing ~~Wintertigress chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
Damn, your pretty good

postcript: aren't haikus juz so fun to write? i've made some... juz loved the feeling of getting 'em done
Olivine chapter 4 . 1/4/2006
wow, this one was reaaly beautiful. keep thinking outside the box, cuz thats what makes you stand out. and, of course, keep on writing ~~Wintertigress

p.s.~my haikus arent that much out of the box...well, they arent at all, really, but theyre good, atleast. do you think you could take a look at them? please and thankyou!
Olivine chapter 3 . 1/3/2006
thinking otside the box. nice. where have i heard that saying before...? oh, yeah. burgerking. no, wait, tacobell...-sigh- ive gotten my fastfood restaurants mixed up, now. lol, anyways, keep writing ~~Wintertigress
dejah of mars chapter 3 . 1/3/2006
i love thesesimpleelegantbeautiful
alice chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
it's powerful... and i like how you abandoned formal structure... sometimes you just have to break out of the ordinary... and the essence made it all worthwhile... nice job and happy new years
Tr APeze-sWiNGer chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
oddly beautiful
sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
i can see images on the waterlike pictures in a movie screen