|Reviews for Everyday|
| luv me like no other chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
Whoa, this is wrong. poor girl. guys can be awful. I love the way you use parenthesis.
| tearitrightup chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
semen tastes bitter? i never knew that...hm.
| dirty windows chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
Wonderfully gritty. The () simply add more to the atmosphere. Reminds me of a little secret someone is sharing.
That first part is simply amazing. Bitter and maybe just a little angry, but hopeless. The emotions were conveyed very strongly (to me). Of course, they could be different for everybody, but I'm taking my poetic interpretive license.
| theory of black chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
I like the abstract of this. Good job.
| astral boy chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
are you from australia? you said some things that reminded me of something. anyway, i liked this. it was angry and bitter, yep.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
love the choppiness. love the whole thing, actually.
| none of burt's beeswax chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
i love that you put this under the category of love. these words are extremely powerful and very, very lovely. the ending is heart-wrenching bitterness and a punch in the gut.
| my failure chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
wow! is all i got to say about this. this is awesome. lovely job:)
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
oh god, this is so amazing. i love it. the way it's written, the words, everything.
| Blue Devil012 chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
Heh, I completely undterstood that. The feelings I mean, I could imagine it.
| randompoetry chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
I like the choppiness, and I like how the parenthesis say the true meaning behind the before words. This was a sad poem, well-written, I like the style of it.
| just a teardrop chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
great poem! really expressive and powerful, and i love the format. nice work!