Reviews for Everyday
luv me like no other chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
Whoa, this is wrong. poor girl. guys can be awful. I love the way you use parenthesis.
tearitrightup chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
semen tastes bitter? i never knew
dirty windows chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
Wonderfully gritty. The () simply add more to the atmosphere. Reminds me of a little secret someone is sharing.

That first part is simply amazing. Bitter and maybe just a little angry, but hopeless. The emotions were conveyed very strongly (to me). Of course, they could be different for everybody, but I'm taking my poetic interpretive license.
theory of black chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
I like the abstract of this. Good job.
astral boy chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
are you from australia? you said some things that reminded me of something. anyway, i liked this. it was angry and bitter, yep.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
love the choppiness. love the whole thing, actually.

~* noelle
none of burt's beeswax chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
i love that you put this under the category of love. these words are extremely powerful and very, very lovely. the ending is heart-wrenching bitterness and a punch in the gut.
my failure chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
wow! is all i got to say about this. this is awesome. lovely job:)
a lonely september chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
oh god, this is so amazing. i love it. the way it's written, the words, everything.
Blue Devil012 chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
Heh, I completely undterstood that. The feelings I mean, I could imagine it.
randompoetry chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
I like the choppiness, and I like how the parenthesis say the true meaning behind the before words. This was a sad poem, well-written, I like the style of it.
just a teardrop chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
great poem! really expressive and powerful, and i love the format. nice work!