|Reviews for Transparent Paranoia|
| sunny-california chapter 17 . 3/26/2012
it's a really good story and I love cill update plz
| xXx.Fallen.Angel.xXx chapter 17 . 3/14/2009
I absolutly LOVE this story its is so awesome. The character are compleltely Awesome, and I love Kelsi, he reminds me of... me... but as a guy, ya know?
Anyways, You better update it soon or I will go insaine. I wanna know what happenes.
ps. drunken kelsi lol.
| Mags chapter 17 . 12/17/2008
Love this story...can't wait for the next chapter
| EmptyAnne chapter 17 . 12/13/2008
GAH! I don't really know what to write (I'm really sleepy..) but I love it! And they finally kissed!
| The Ouch chapter 17 . 4/30/2008
your chapter name is a song by bright eyes! yay!
well this story is really cute so keep up the good work
| Keiria Encrypt chapter 17 . 4/27/2008
This story is just too hilarious and awesome. I had to sit and read it through the night because it is just that good.
Please update soon
| cescy chapter 17 . 4/11/2008
i'm totally keen on this story - its fun and random and sexy and just too freaking cute. don't make me wait too much longer for more frama, intrigue and laughter yeah?
| fjlgtp98awen chapter 17 . 4/10/2008
hoyl crap, awesomeness,
| Iconic chapter 17 . 4/9/2008
Ok, so I finally just cauhgt ip, and WOW! i really liek this story! it's so funny and cute. you're characters are great, so unique and well developed. I can't wait for cill and Kelsi to get togetehr, because i KNOW they will...(right?) anyway, great job, never stop writting. Looking forward to frequent updates!
| Back of Beyond chapter 17 . 2/29/2008
Cool story, can't wait for the next chapter. :]
| prplmnkybut chapter 17 . 2/14/2008
lol not cool! ur not allowed to get excited about the storie in front of me! lol
| Switch chapter 2 . 1/30/2008
Ok, it looks like you're way ahead and have probably written the dancing thing, but I wanted to say you should SO include Rainbows in the Dark by Tilly and the Wall. I don't know if you've heard of them, but they're this indie band and the have a tap dancer as part of their percussion. Here's a link to a video of the song ( It's on a Chinese website, but it should work ok.
Also, Cill should change the spelling of his name to Cyll so he fits with the rest of the band. He's the only one without a Y in his name. Ok, I'm going to continue reading your story now. _
| Meri chapter 16 . 1/18/2008
OMG! AN UPDATE! *dances around room*
| FireFliesInTheMist chapter 15 . 11/6/2007
I considered a multiple of fashions in which to force you to write another chapter, and after careful consideration of each, have decided that none of them seem likely to work. That being said, this story is just too fluffy not to be finished - this many unsaid "I love you"s just eats a whole in my chest, and I imagine it's the same for you. So let it out, crazy writer person! Give me another chapter that I might melt into a pool of warm-and-fuzzyness.
| CaseyBear chapter 15 . 9/30/2007
This story makes me feel vary gangster.