Reviews for Untitled
Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
Cool! I love this! Great job!
lostandwandering chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
for reviewing my poem. your poem is to the point, but i can see the deeper meaning. keep writing.
lordelfy chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
good poem..i like this
hey maria chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
The last line is just killer..
Herminia chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
Short and sweet. I liked it.
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
Wow...I simply love this haiku. Powerful, deep and very angst-ridden. Good job.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
To condemn ourselves (supposedly) should bring such peace to ourselves- I think someone lied when they said self-mutilation was the new in-way-to live. I’ve known so many people who’ve fallen into this category; I’m glad that I’ve never had the stomach for self-destruction. I’m one of those people who let others destroy her rather then doing it herself- I guess underneath we’re all one or another. [Crazy thoughts! This is just what came to mind while reading this.]

Juliet.
randompoetry chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
Oh, ouch, the words just hurt my teeth! This was so powerful in just a few words.