Reviews for Forever is just past the skyline
Jones di Christian D chapter 1 . 8/25/2006
most of your work brings out so many thoughts. things that ive experianced. Its that same bittersweet feeling i get when leaving a 'certain place' ( you know where) its like a pulsating kick in the stomach with the lossof breath, but the memory it self usually isnt the hard part. its what i remeber happened to it which brings the stomach pain. its evocative stuff, your poems
in theory chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
The italics just whispered to me intensely. Inexorable is how I would describe this in one word.
lordelfy chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
great poem and great message...it reminds me of how ppl lead other ppl on
Maya Paige Turner chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
this is an absolutely lovely piece...

"but i loved you enough to pretend"

perfect... don't change a thing!
inferno tempest chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
this was just great. i loved the way you set it out. this poem has alot of emotions in it. great work :D
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
I loved the part about the music - turning the music up loud while driving through the neighborhood. Its such a right of passage when you drive down the streets that you used to have to walk down with the radio blasting - letting all those kids up in their rooms here you coming. I remember when I got my first car, the second that I turned onto the street that I lived on the radio went up full blast. Very nice here.

Juliet.
sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
loved the title, loved the ending. i think putting 'with the' between 'car' and the 'hood down' would make it flow better.