Reviews for on the shelf
Tikklz chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
Favorite part was "fender strings and kerosene". Don't know if the effect you were going for is the one I got, but I thought about destruction and stuff like that. Nice job.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
Wow, interesting ending and last two lines. Evokes the feeling of searching, searching, and perhaps finding.
RedHairedWriter chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
"I’ll be just fine, Pretending I’m not"

I love that.
Anna178 chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
I really love this one. Brilliant as always.

randompoetry chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
Wow, this was good, I really like the line "fender strings and kerosene."
a lonely september chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
'fender strings and kerosene' that was wonderful. it reminded me of a song i once heard by the used.
thursdays and rain chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
i'll be just fine, pretending i'm not.. i'm far from lonely & it's all that i've got.. laladida.. i The Used too & i adore this poem c:
sixPAC chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
WOW, great description in this poem with really powerfull words, fantastic.