Reviews for Jerry Grimes
Luthien and Tari chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
It's not all that bad. Some of the phrasing is a bit awkward, and in the beginning you used 'Ben' too many times, but I thought it was fine otherwise. There were some typos (I think in one place you wrote 'meat' while you meant 'meet')

So who was the author? Would I recognize the name? (That's pretty cool! I've never met an actual author. :( )