Reviews for No Angel
Lauren Wolfe chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
Aww...that's so sad...I like the way you "forced" the identity of the persona...very well done!
Infinity Plus One chapter 1 . 2/8/2006
xotam chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
I think you should really work on the structure, and word choices. It's OK. but, bits of it, are just plain horrible. Mostly, the word choices and how the rhymes, just aren't suitable for each other. It sounds like you just put anything down to make it rhyme.
just a teardrop chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
I love the emotion in this - very strong and powerful. effective. but some of the rhyme seems a bit forced... still, nice work.