I liked that story well written I liked the clever narration as well _

this is amazing! really good! :D i love the relationship between the narrator and the audience. lovely work!

constructive criticism: there were a few typos: mostly 'explications' when it should be 'explinations' (i think). also, i didn't really like the 'nature' paragraph at the end, it seemed sort of patronising...

but other than that, this is AMAZING! :D