Reviews for You
interrobangdance chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
Really sad, and it flows well. Perhaps "Isn't it funny that we know each other so well/After the heart break" would benefit from a question mark? (I'm not being anally retentive hehe but it would give a little variety to your punctuation) Nothing else to comment on apart from that, it was a great read.
Cheny chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
I love the emotion of the poem, the only criticism i would make is to say that you should engage the reader feel the same way
Jodie Sinclair chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
great job love it to death!so much emotion
button-nose chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
I found this very sweet, if a little sad perhaps. I got the impression of a fantastic bond shared between two people. I love the way you have put that across and with so much emotion...i hope things work out for you both...in wahtever way that may be...great job

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