|Reviews for boy adonis|
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
I swoon over our title. itissoperfect.
ahh, Adonis you would have made a fairly molestable boy. 'tis true.
one day I will be shot for saying stuff like that.
lovely, as usualy (yourockmypoeticsocks).
| Luthiena o Lorien chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
Oh, lovely, lovely, lovely! This myth has always been one of my favorites: Wonderful job on this! I loved the last line.
| none of burt's beeswax chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
Oh, I love the ending. I've never thought about the echo of a river, but rivers really do have echos. I also like "soul(apparition)." Very gorgeous. The "-justbreathe-" reminds me of the movie, "Ever After," which reminds me of glittering, starry silver angel costumes. Good work.
| dystynctlidotti chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
Short and sweet (or maybe bitter... I'm not really sure.) Awesome syntax- makes the whole poem feel like a dream.
| Haberdasher chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
i love the last line. haunting and lovely-the Lady Elaine