Reviews for I Can Never Be
bleeding subterfuge chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
the rhyming is excellent, i think you would write even better prose. i too, spill out rhymes though- and can't help it. over all wonderful piece
shivathedestroyess chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
Love it...truly awesome...
WiltingBlackRose chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
Sorry sorry. I must've accidently deleted the author alert in my email. Thanks for the compliment.

I really loved this poem. It's really sad and has a lot of feeling in it.
Rozlin chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
sweety, i'm sorry you're stuck in that. hopefully you wont have to go threw with such an ultimatium. smile my pretty :)!
Sweet Persephone chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
It's very good and I really get where you're coming from. Excellent work!
Alisha Marie chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
I know the feeling...Nicely put.
Plinky chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
Aww, that's so sad. Beautifully expressed. Lovely length, and the ending is really nice.

Flows well. Keep writing! ; )