I'm a newcommer but I really like your story. You've got real talent as writer. I can't wait for the next installment! _

-:-loonyluna9-:-

Is that girl Lee's new girlfriend?

Haha! I'm glad Hailey and Kathy are going to be friends again, was really wierd. Anyways, keep writing!

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honestly, i didnt want to read this story. after i read those two chapters of 'not your average job' i had you on authors alerts, to naturally, ive been getting all these alerts saying that youve been upating other stories. well, saw this one a couple times, and im like 'nah, i dont really wanna read it. ill wait for the other story' seriously, though, im sorry i didnt click on the link before. im really really liking this story, and im shocked that people think youre being stereotypical. ive got a goth kid in my own grade, and he wears black, a weird trench coat sort of thing, black hat, eye liner, and hes even managed to get himself a pair of black gloves that has the fingers cut off of them. but people say hes just a wanna be goth because he doesnt act depressed or anything; hes regularly seen, literally, skipping down the hallway to his classes. hes not the nicest person in the world, but people arent nice to him and hes nice to whoever is nice to him, which does mean me. well im getting a little off track... the point is: no one seriously knows what a goth is anymore. and i hate when people start getting all stereotypical about 'groups' of people. were all different! and it does NOT seem like youre saying 'this is how all goths act. they're always depressed, thats why they wear black.' thats about the same as saying 'this is how all girls named haylie act. they repeatedly say 'yes' when they dont know whats going on' which is obviously not true. have i made a good point? i hope so...

youve got good spelling and sentence structure. awesome details, too. and after i read that first sentence or so, of the first chapter, i just started reading more and kept on until i got to the end of this chapter. you seriously got me hooked! and now im hoping that youll update soon. this story and 'not your average job'.

well, keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-::-

Awesome chapter, update again soon! Who's the chick?

SL

This was so great! Please udpate soon!

Aww...a doggy story :D I'm proud to say, I have a HUGE phobia of dogs...but I love them! Weird isn't it? I love them in magazines and photos but I'm terrified of them up close...

Anyway, this story is still going strong! I LOVE it and UPDATE SOON!

I'm guessing thats Lee's sister. Good chapter, I just hope she breaks it off with Jack soon. I miss Lee. Update soon

I LOVE IT! update asap please. :D

loving it. this was great and i really liked how you ended it. update soon, as in the next 5 mins coz im bored and wnat to read more. or maybe i could just reread it? i dont know. anyway, go you!luvya,

yeah babe! This chapter was awesome! No cliffhangers nothing! Hurry up & update so I can read this story!

~Lucy

Hola! I really like your story and now i'm intrigued to know what is she going to tell jack.

Update soon!Besos

I liked the way you ended this chapter! good effect. But I don't like it cus now I have to wait for her answer. hehe. I don't think you are insulting goths, this people are silly and are looking for things to get annoyed at. Just because your character has made a mistake and isn't perfect (but who is) doesn't mean that you are attacking all the people who are goths, like that character. I think you're story is good the way it is and I'm looking forward for the next chapter.

Hey! Wow! Poor Hailey! I wonder if Lee knows about it that she is hang around with Jack? I wonder how will she going to explain to Jack about Lee? Hurry update soon.

Yay! You updated! D Hehee. I'm excited to see where this story goes!

*Sara Kay

BWA HAHAHAHA!

Poor Hailey. But Cathy and Hailey shouldn't be arguing, it doesn't seem like a big deal. And Cathy should try to make amends with Hailey. Anyways, great story. Keep writing!

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