Reviews for Dog Walker
bongogirl chapter 6 . 2/10/2006
Yeah, this is a really good story! U better update 'cuz I want to know what happens with Belinda the Bitch (sorry I kinda nicknamed her) and LEE!
Out-Spoken-Runaway chapter 6 . 2/10/2006

Lee is cute. Keep writing, your stories are so awesome!

Belinda seems...err...*cough*barbieish*cough*

Is that even a word? It is now!

Anyways...Lee is evil!...But cute...

CynicalValentine98 chapter 6 . 2/10/2006
Nice chapter. Kind of not liking Belinda for some reason, however. Hm... Anyways update soon.
sNiCKeTFiRE chapter 6 . 2/10/2006
i only hate lee so much because my sister got screwed over by a guy like that. but lee does have a nice side - but i'm trying to ignore that. teehee. my favorite character is probably jack ... i don't know why. i really like him though.

thanks soo much for reading my story! I love your reviews - they make me happy!

i thought this chapter was fine - and it didn't seem like too much dialogue. description wise ... hmm ... the only thing i can think of (and i'm really reaching high for this) would be if you wanted to describe, for instance, how the weather was when they went to the park or how hailey's dog may have reacted to belinda. i mean, there isn't that much critical detail you missed ... unless you just wanted to elaborate on certain actions more. i dunno! every author has their preference!

adios chica!

Ms.Romantic chapter 6 . 2/10/2006
mistii chapter 5 . 2/6/2006
it wasn't too great
EvangelineGoth chapter 5 . 2/4/2006
O.M.G! Jack loves her too?
Ms.Romantic chapter 5 . 2/4/2006
looving it chapter 5 . 2/4/2006
Interesting...Good luck God bless!
CynicalValentine98 chapter 5 . 2/4/2006
I enjoyed this chapter. Update soon.
a lonely september chapter 5 . 2/4/2006
awkward ending. im thinking shes gonna kiss him or something, to cause some trouble in the plot. i'm waiting. sorry i havent reviewed before... ive been real busy.
sNiCKeTFiRE chapter 5 . 2/4/2006
aww jackie-boy played stupid so he could be with ha-ha-ha-hailey! that is so sweet. "...i understood most of it before." mwahahaha. reaal smoth.

anyways - ahem - i was kind of disappointed by lee's lack of groinal pain in this chapter. teehee - just joking. i mean i was disappointed, but i didn't expect it to be in there.

..."and then lee's dog suddenly seemed to be stricken with a vicious streak of anger and his pearly whites sunk right in to that which lee cherished and ran off down the road ... leaving lee cold and alone ... and a man no more..."

i don't wanna toot my own horn or anything ... but ... you should SO put that in! hah. okay. maybe i'll give up on this fight of causing lee pain ... but i shall return with more suggestions ... like jack kissing hailey after hailey finds out lee has a girlfriend - but lee doesn't know hailey knows ... and then all this tension and drama emerges ...

perhaps it is still too early for me to try and make sense of what i'm saying ... perhaps i should meander back to bed...
Glock40 chapter 5 . 2/4/2006
wow this is great! i dont know why heaps of people are getting fussy over the goth-being-perfect-image thingy, it doesnt really matter. But yes, i like the story, because it has a nice complex plot... and maybe a twist... like i think cathy might be lees girlfriend, dont ask me why, but at the bit where they were talking about cathys love life, lee came to mind, but thatss just me i guess. Chapter 5 was so short :'( hehe it was still good. Update soon!
Holly Young chapter 5 . 2/4/2006
I really like it. Please write more! im so anxious about what hailey's gonna do about jack!Maybe the title could be um, ok this is gonna sound really lame, but goth walker. ya i know, it sux. but oh well! keep writing!
Elgeria chapter 5 . 2/4/2006
Hey i'm loving this story so far please continue soon! -always milz
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