Reviews for Dog Walker
Jacangurl220 chapter 4 . 1/21/2006
adding descriptions gives the reader a better view of the characters. keep up the great work!
sitabird chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
Ugh...there is nothing worse than a goth who calls himself a goth. What a poser.
Sara Kay chapter 4 . 1/19/2006
Hey, I really like this story! It's really original. I wonder what that picture what of... and who was on the phone? Hmm.. ;-) Keep up the great work and update soon!

*Sara Kay
mookyjoo chapter 4 . 1/19/2006
Nice story! Lee totally makes me ... feel .. wanted! haha lovely story! keep it up!
sNiCKeTFiRE chapter 4 . 1/18/2006
i could have SWORN i reviewed for your other two chapters but i obviously have some issues, being as i didn't see them anywhere. perhaps i imagined it ... and perhaps i'm imagining this as well. how ... crazy of me. anyways, loving it or course except for Lee-bert, that lying, dirty, cheating, scummy-scum-scum-scum-a-roo. his dog, rex, should bit him in the nuts!


did snicket jsut say that!yea, and i meant it too! if he doesn't suffer a near-castration or whatever in the next chapter, i'm going to be thoroughly disappointed. make jacky-boy make out with hailey so lee feels like SHIT ... even though he's cheating ... just make karma bitch slap him! hell yes mother f-er!
omaterluna chapter 4 . 1/17/2006
oh i just love this story update soon!
Ms.Romantic chapter 4 . 1/17/2006
i love it
CynicalValentine98 chapter 4 . 1/17/2006
Does Jack like Hailey? Hmm... Anyways great chapter, update soon.
NathaLIES chapter 4 . 1/17/2006
This is a really nice piece of fluff!

I can't wait for another chapter. Goth boys are just THAT hot. Especially when they've got a lip-ring. Tongue-rings freak me out though.
shiloh fire chapter 3 . 1/16/2006
i'm just anticipating the whole "I have a girlfriend" or them getting caught together by his girlfriend or ... yea ... just the whole entire part that you know is going to cause drama and tears. poor hailey ... poor lee ... and who is this Jack? Is he going to be another problem causer in the whole "Hailey-Lee" love scandal? mwahaha. you have no idea how crazy everything is getting in my head. can't wait for more. literally. POST RIGHT NOW!
Under the Stars chapter 3 . 1/9/2006
damn! she's lucky. i like it, but i'm not anticipating when she finds out he has a girlfriend. you can't just take that sitting and smiling
maeve of hearts chapter 3 . 1/9/2006
I really like this story..It's excellant! Thanks for Thanking me too! I feel special!
CynicalValentine98 chapter 3 . 1/9/2006
I like it. Update soon.
Jacangurl220 chapter 3 . 1/9/2006
yea it would make the story flow a lot better if u included a description of her friends. u don't ever want the reader to have to assume wat the different characters are like. i really like this story and u get better with each chapter. keep up the good work and update soon!
EvangelineGoth chapter 3 . 1/9/2006
OMG! I see complications! Is Jack in love with her or something? YAY! Lee and Hailey went out on a date! UPDATE SOON!
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