Reviews for Push me up against the wall
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
What a cool little poem. I especially like "side street brawl" and the rhyming and flow of this piece. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
hey maria chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
Really good short poems are hard to write; you can put a few lines together and call it a poem, but that doesn't mean it has any power or meaning in it. But this does. The rhythm was lovely and so was the meaning. This is going on my favorites.
Autumn Dance chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
Really powerful. Good rhyme and signature. I think the way it's been laid out- it's almost like you the reader's not really meant to care about anything else but the words and that's a clever and frivolous way of doing it. Your layout is perfect. x
ThisCut-UpAngel chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
Short and straight to the point. I love it!
mezzie chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
this is really cool. short but very complete, good flow, comprehensive image.

a lonely september chapter 1 . 1/7/2006 normally i'm not one for rhyming, but this is amazing, the emotion swept it away. the last line was amazing, wonderful. : )
AeroSea chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
Very well done sir. I can see it all in my mind.
philod chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
you did well capturing the emotion. i could picture that perfectly
myheartiswaypastbeating chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
Good poem, I like it, well done.