|Reviews for Push me up against the wall|
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
What a cool little poem. I especially like "side street brawl" and the rhyming and flow of this piece. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
| hey maria chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
Really good short poems are hard to write; you can put a few lines together and call it a poem, but that doesn't mean it has any power or meaning in it. But this does. The rhythm was lovely and so was the meaning. This is going on my favorites.
| Autumn Dance chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
Really powerful. Good rhyme and signature. I think the way it's been laid out- it's almost like you the reader's not really meant to care about anything else but the words and that's a clever and frivolous way of doing it. Your layout is perfect. x
| ThisCut-UpAngel chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
Short and straight to the point. I love it!
| mezzie chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
this is really cool. short but very complete, good flow, comprehensive image.
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
...wow... normally i'm not one for rhyming, but this is amazing, the emotion swept it away. the last line was amazing, wonderful. : )
| AeroSea chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
Very well done sir. I can see it all in my mind.
| philod chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
you did well capturing the emotion. i could picture that perfectly
| myheartiswaypastbeating chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
Good poem, I like it, well done.