|Reviews for An Uninspired Villanelle|
| Rovandin chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
Sweet. he he. You remind me of me if I had never met Taylor.
| Lt.G. Ryu chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
i understand. would've done it before class.
| searchlight chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
Liking it for sure. When I am required to write things for a class...poetry etc. my inspiration shrivels up like so many prunes. Wow, that was a really stupid thing to say, but I think you get my drift, right? I'm sorry! I'm so tired! I cannot force myself to write (at least not well). Usually I'll be doing something completely not related and inspiration will hit. Some name, a turn of phrase, the hidden beauty in something...Please keep writing, the world needs more writers like
| hey maria chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
::squee:: Villanelles are cool. I wrote one too. It's called 'nothing holy' if you want to check it out. Hint, hint.
I know, I'm so subtle.
I like this. It made me laugh; I also like the repeating lines you chose.