Reviews for Butterflies
theory of black chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
Butterflies are gorgeous, just like this poem. Good job.
blacklives4ever chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
That's really nice... and really beautiful. I think it was the part where you mentioned fuschia - that's my favorite flower, and I could picture the butterfly so perfectly when you said that. It's really a nice poem, I like it a lot.

And thank you so much for your wonderful review! It's always nice to get a good comment.
Morcirith chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
i was reading along when this kamikaze line hits me outta nowhere! unexpected.
Ryenon chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
I'll never think of butterlies again...greatness!
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
Excellent use of light imagery combined with a harsher moving imagery with the "kamikaze F16 pilot on Mach 1", this switches the focus well and creates an all toghther different kind of imagery. Good write.
Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
What a bittersweet feeling this poem leaves a person...I like your descriptions of the butterfly.