Great start. Interested to see what's next.

I realy hope that doesn't happen in lingerie stores either. XD It was all very hot and I loved, loved, loved your description of Duncan's eyes. *sigh* Very sexy. ;) Both names of the main characters mean darkness right? Coincidence? :o

wow that was totally hot!

Very good! :)



~Bubbly Girl

LMAOO "I'll buy whatever she was trying on!"

Great story!

HAHA iLL HAVE WHATEVER SHE WAS TRYING ON!

Awesome

HEY!

This story was awesome... and pretty damn funny aswell lol.

I'm gonna have a look at your toher stories now I think :)

Have a gd week!

BYE!

x x x

It's written that Kiera isn't shocked that Duncan is "arrogant, stubborn, bull-headed or persistent" but is shocked by the fact that he's still chasing after her even with the knowledge that she has a "fiance". But wouldn't that make him "arrogant, stubborn, bull-headed [and] persistent"?

I don't want to get technical, but just something I noticed.

Great one-shot though, really enjoyed the mixes of humour and passion. )

Hahah...so cute! :P

xx

Perfectly Flawless underwear and all. ) I Loved it. Can I have a Duncan?

Okay I read the story again and thought it was new...yes for a future doc, i dont have a good memory..but eh I'll hire Anne. Anyways if i thought it was new, it deserved a new review. So I wana try that lingere now if I can get that rxn! Awesome one shot!

schmexy. :D aww i wish this wasn't just a one shot though.

From outside the fitting room, a woman’s voice exclaimed, “I’ll buy whatever she was trying on!”

Priceless! LMFAO! My favorite part! I loved this alot, thank you :]

I want whatever she's trying on hahaha. i absolutely loved this, it was way to hilarious. Great oneshot!