Reviews for The Lion
Femme de Dieu chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
Ooh, chilling! You should go read my Diabolico...same general theme, you just expressed it so much more succinctly. I didn't give my feral creature a name...but you capture the same feeling with the lion's eyes. Yes, those calculating eyes they glimmer with with a such a captivating heat, that you can't escape- and then it's too late!

I wonder- were you writing metaphorically or literally? Because there are many people out there with similar eyes and intentions...

Truly, Tourterelle
A Pin One chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
I really liked your poem and think that you should always keep writing.
miglet chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
hi there, this is an interesting vision of a lion, how you focus on his face and how it has all meanings behind them, very interesting!