Reviews for The Hero That Never Was
Erisah Mae chapter 2 . 4/28/2007
Lol, shame you never finished this... it could have been even more amusing!
Lissa Wyga chapter 2 . 1/7/2006
had to review again, I love this premiss and the second chapter is really good. Keep it up, can't wait to read the next chapter.
silentsound chapter 2 . 1/3/2006
very nice beginning. I cant wait to see where this goes. Your writing style is very clear and effective. The only thing i would say to work on is to describe more. Your fine at describing the actions, but maybe you could do a little more on the people and places. It will not only make the story more realistic, but longer. Thank you for reviewing my story, i realized after i read through it another time, all my mistakes. I will make the future chapters better. thank you!
SnakesYaFilthyAnimal chapter 2 . 1/2/2006
Ha, I love the reference to the Holy Grail!
Lissa Wyga chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
this is very good. I can't wait to see what happens next. I think everyone can sympathesize with hitting links and taking quizzes against our better judgement.