Girl, you know I can't keep my hangs off of one of your stories.

This has some great character depth, and it's only the first chapter! You could really go places with this if you wanted.

Your word choice, detail, and humor have all evolved since you were going at Operation Crossdress, and it's something I really enjoy.

I pleases me to say that it actually feels like I'm reading professional work, and not the amateur gimmicks of most of the other writers on the site. It really makes me feel like I'm using that whole "10%" of my brain, ya know?

Word.

I really like this! It's well written and keeps your attention. Please update and if you do message me or something because I forget what stories I read. lol.

But yeah this is really good. Please continue writting!

-Corri

PS Have an awesome-o day that would kick anyone's side of holy noodles!