Now I cannot decide who I like more, from a girl's point of view. Patrick or Marielle.

I absolutely enjoyed, adored and was probably the best piece of fiction both published and online I've recently read.

I like how they constantly keep playing games with each other, and WHY DID YOU HAVE TO STOP WHEN THINGS WERE GETTING GOOD.

Lastly, I think I like Patrick from a totally shallow girl's point of view. Hot, charming, and intelligent to boot.

PS. UPDATE. It's been 2 YEARS.

please tell me you are continuing this story, it's great and i really want to read at least one more chapter.

even though I only discovered the story recently, I've been addicted to it from the first chapter. Love everything about the story, but, when is a new chapter going to come out? please update soon!

hey i really like your story. but are you ever goimg to finish it?

my GOD i love this story

the more i read, the more addicted i get

you make everything seem so realistic and believable

it is so fascinating

loved the idea

its so original :)

Patricks a bit depressive though i guess there would not be much of a story if he were not

anyways its really really interesting

Ugh, why did I even both reading this story.

You never update. It's pointless. Man, I hate authors on this site that do that to people.

It's so friggin annoying, oh well.

Thanks for the good unfinished read anyways.

Wow.

What happens next? Are you ever going to finish this story? I love it btw :)

So you haven't updated for a while... But I still have hope. Not that you need one more nagging review... But. I love the story. And it would be a huge waste if it was never finished. I absolutely respect that you may not want to write more now or for months onward... But I'll still be eagerly anticipating the next chapter, because I know it'll be worth it.

This makes me your 1013 eview (I'm so jello btw) But anyway I think this story is so clever and it's not so simple, which I appreciate. I thought that he would have just became the new it boy and they would have fallen in love. But this is way darker and more complex. There are twists with the mind gmes and complexities. Shes more complex then what I originally thought. I felt real bad for Dereck, nice guys finish last rite, 8( . I would like to see you write more stories and update. But I'm not one to judge *guilty looks* . And the last thing is, let's see, G0 0rioles! (my brother likes them)

You've confused me thoroughly with your characters and their mind games. I'm sure it gives you great personal satisfaction knowing that :) Patrick is... in cheerleader words, I suppose, never having met a cheerleader, kind of hot. Well he's cool and the computer genius thing is different. And a guy writing a story on FictionPress is very different. But you're one of the best I've read, so YAY :D I hope you remember the existence of this story soon- it's been almost two years. Sigh.

please update asap *puppy dog eyes*

oh my gosh i absolutely adore this story! just the tension between patrick and marielle is fabulous! keep up the good work and PLEASE update soon! (:

I just began-and finished-this story. It's the first I've read of yours, and I. Am. Impressed. You haven't updated in something like a year though! Looking forward to the next chapter, whenever it comes. :)