Reviews for Beating the Game
Aisucold chapter 4 . 3/30/2009
ha! pats so witty! its amusing
Aisucold chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
that was brilliant! i really enjoyed it
Niko5670 chapter 14 . 3/28/2009
oh and loved the asian mother...so deja vu from myrika...though patrick fared a lot better...
Niko5670 chapter 18 . 3/28/2009
oh yeah...they are so getting yelled...and boy am i torn when it come to pratick...part of me wants to kill him for being such a dumbass and evil man...the other part just sees this as making him more human with flaws...a bad boy...and a hot one at that...andgosh can the story get any better...when do we hear about marielle's past...i have a suspicion that there is something hidden...and i cant wait for the drama to unfold...so better get your butt in front of the computer and move it..
Niko5670 chapter 17 . 3/28/2009
its funny how he keeps calculating...even when she points it out...and poor pat...they both are already caught up...they just wont admit it...lol...ah this defientely makes me laugh...is there even a power struggleanymore...or is it more of a pride struggle?
Niko5670 chapter 16 . 3/28/2009
damn...red sox fan...bloody great...and here i like you oh so much...jk...oh well...lwts not get into sports arguments...i know i will lose miserably...lol...and i love this story...the drama...the plotting...the suspense...its just...like chocolate...excellent plot development...i love to read a story that build it up just right...no throwing you right in with no explanation...or going on and on endlessly...like i'm doing now...anywho...great.. story...
Niko5670 chapter 6 . 3/28/2009
oh yeah...defientely happy of having my high school not like that...or at least that i dont feel it...and software engineer? that is so cool...i'm thinking about that kinda career pathway too...heck maybe even getting into MIT...lol.
Niko5670 chapter 5 . 3/28/2009
wow...not dense? i begto differ...nobody dense (in my opinion) can construct a well plot like this...its interesting all the ruthlessness going on...girls can be quiet capable of it...
Niko5670 chapter 4 . 3/28/2009
thank god my school is nothing like this...
Niko5670 chapter 3 . 3/28/2009
gosh that was funny...i'm addicted to the story now...nothing like a good dose of drama...
Niko5670 chapter 2 . 3/28/2009
you definetely know how to make the girl treacherous...no offense...but i never thought a guy could be this good in girl psyche...but you just proved me wrong..
Niko5670 chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
boy did that last part seriously make my day! that was in my opinion the best tell off...and that comes from being in high school myself...that was awesome...
6 Feet Under chapter 18 . 3/24/2009
I just luvv this story!
heavengurl899 chapter 2 . 2/26/2009
Oh yea MAC or PC? (you can chose any other OS system you want also)
heavengurl899 chapter 18 . 2/26/2009
ohh disappointment. The kid couldn't stay "faithful" to Hikari. My faith in Patrick is completely lost and I'm very disappointed in him. He's just another guy being controlled by his dick. How easy and typical. Anyways you haven't updated in forever so you need to get updating ASAP. :D.
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