this is a oneshot right?
its really good :D

Good story, a nice light read and it's very difficult to get the information you did across in 1st person - well done.

agrresive me: *noms* MORE!

un-aggesive me: *hums in delight* more...?

very cute.

I really like Ben, too. Must come back and read what else you feature them in.

This is one of my favorite stories. I love to read it again and again! :)

That was a fantastic oneshot. very cute. XD

Black boxers do make you feel sexy.

:)

and you did a good job with those funny sister walking in on scenes.

*thumbs up* thats how my sister reacted too haha

OMG! AMAZING! I LAUGHED SO MUCH!

I really love the sister. REALLY. That's exactly what I would do if I walked in on them!

what did his mum walk in on them doing...? I mean, I have an idea but,- -blushes-

Lee

I love this so much!

that's cute! and it's written REALLY well! my friend would never read it, but i think it's adorable how Ben protects Ross. I do that to my friends, but i don't get raped by them on my living room couch. or anywhere else! but still, really well written, good imagrey, good word choice, good everything!

please update i love this thing it is my lobe of my life please

oh shit that was cute! I love their reactions, haha. Nice oneshot!

hahahaha that is realy cute! i loved it and i really think u could make another chapter for it :D or more lol

i think u should continue it . be one hell of a good story if u ask me!

i love it and hope u do write more haha

10/10

~M~

You are BRILLIANT! My friend suggested this story to me, because I'm a huge gay-fangirl... and it turned out SO much better than I expected! You're an exceptional writer and I ADORE the POV! It's unexpected and original.

Go. You.

*loves*

~iMoony