|Reviews for friday night lights|
| a theoretic revolution chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
i love this. i really, really do. this is so vivid & grotesque & beautiful & so many other adjectives i can't think of. it's almost kind of tragic, in a way. nostalgic.
well, well done. :)
| prado.red chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
Beautiful. It seems like the girl is so wonderful and glittery at first, but she's breaking down on the inside. It maintains a dreamy yet heartbreaking feel to it.
| Camelia Sinensis chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
the ending was absolutely brilliant.
it had a certain rhythm to it. a sad jazzy feeling.
just loved it to pieces
| xlilxleex chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
this poem reminds me of a friend of mine,
really hit the spot
if 50% of what you wrote is taken as a metaphor
one of my favs for sure!
| gryffindork09 chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
very vivid imagery, this is a really beautiful poem.
| sunshineofyourlife chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
very good. i'm sorry i can't get to more of your writing right now, but this is excellent!
| the.pink.life chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
Favorite line: "at the sins trailing your stiletto." My God, I don't even know what to say about this poem. It's wonderful. I love it. Keep writing! :)
| wildwolffree17 chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
Very vivid images painted beautifully.
| felicia13 chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
Hi! I really like your poetry, especially under 'pink dandy lion'. Good work! I love the way the words just come together in this poem, it's like looking at the best painting in the world. A true artist makes it look easy and effortless, and you've captured that. None of the words are forced, and it flows like a stream winding through the endless forest of time. An excellent write!
Thanks bunches for the review! I try to be different. ) Actually, no, it's just the way I am. Thanks again for the lovely compliments, and the addition of me to your favs list(s).
May inspiration never leave you wanting!
all my love,felicia
| Lucid Nonsense chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
Wow, so sad, and so beautifully written. I feel like I knew her after reading this, great job.
| kmctinkerbell chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
Really good well written, I like all the emotion and meaning
| button-nose chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
i love this...its definitly going on my favourites list... I love the great use of emotion and i love the way you paint my imagination with your words...i was captured and taken in hook line and sinker..im a sucker for pieces like this! great great work...as always!
Button Nose x x
| mezzie chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
ow. this hurts and shows so much insight and and... sigh. it's so hard when broken people can't fix themselves and we've got to see the struggle and a million other shadows and god i remember days like that. sorry for the runon babble :)completely digs into my heart.
| White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
Oh my fucking god.
This is amazing. Favorites list.
I tried to copy and paste my favorite lines but I'd highlighted the entire page. Every single line gave me the shivers. Wow, this is just so cleverly done.
You're incredibly talented. Keep writing.
| HellHeartedlyBent chapter 1 . 1/7/2006
wow...that was so intricate and beautiful. the buildup was amazing. truly loved it.