Reviews for Dear You
MorbidAngelXxX chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
Brilliant.
dirty windows chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
Oh this one was amazing. Simple, but so smart.
K. L. Kirby chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
wow, i like this one... its kinda dark, but yet its sad, so sad that i think a tear has sprung
Marginal Shakespeare chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
Oh my god, I totally love this! It's so awesome, you should totally turn it into a song and let my band play it! _
Sammyjo-2801 chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
That was a really interesting poem. I liked your use of enjambment in that, it added a little (rustic?) flair to the mood.

I can kind of relate to the subject...I've often found myself writing those weird letters...*changes subject* anyway...

Thanks for reading my work. I really appreciate your opinion.

Sammyjo
Infinite Smiles chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
Very unique. I like...
sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
a letter to say that love isn't simple or a bunch of xoxos (we aren't playing a game) the words are erasable but the hearts at the bottom are written in pen because our love is so sure. this is so cryptic.

wicked.
white-chokolat chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
no
R.J. Crosbie chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
Your poem really reminded me of my fourth grade crush. I really liked it.
randompoetry chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
Great poem, I enjoyed the beginning, it was cool.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
Extraordinary word shifts and line breaks. Imagery matches the emotion and the ending is wonderful. Good work
thursdays and rain chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
perfection
a lonely september chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
i loved the last two lines, this was beautiful. great job.