Reviews for Hide and Seek
lymli chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
it feels like an adventure.
grade64 chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
THis was really kind of cool. I personally think that it would flow better if you split the paragraphs(or not, if it is suposed to be a chain of duads) and perhaps cleaned up the meter a bit. the cadence seems to change from line to line. Otherwise it is a wonderful poem. I do really like the Sleeping Beauty theme, with one hiding, asleep, and the other searching for them. Keep up the good work. ;-)
I.O.K.O chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
I'll find you.
Crescent Angel chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
That is a catchy one. I've always wanted to go to Japan, but I really like how your rhymn scheme worked into the poem. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more.
Blazing Chariot chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
Hm... It's interesting. It reminds me of a sphinx's riddle. It's very good, but the repetition gets a bit irritating after a while.