Reviews for The Barricade
Shiina chapter 21 . 12/25/2017
I'm surprised I read this far. The only character I liked was Sebastian and he was treated like shit.
Ibbit chapter 22 . 2/16/2016
This is an amazing story. I love the way its written, with the flashbacks and great descriptions of reactions and people. I loved Lucas's immediate, and problematic sarcasm as a defense and his ability to get lost in his art. His final wall painting sounds amazing. Lucas and Fynn have such a weird but well-fit relationship. Beautiful
somersaultkick chapter 22 . 12/26/2015
It's my comment bellow.
Forgot to relogin.
Guest chapter 22 . 12/26/2015
Poor Sebastian :( I cried when I read the letter.
I always thought that Lucas would eventually realize that he had found another lover, who was Sebastian, and he also realizes that he just took him for granted. And that he finally realizes that people come and go, while Fynn left him, Sebastian came. Turns out I was wrong.
The ending though is nice. Well what can I say? They were meant to be since 1995. Poor Sebastian, the most selfless guy ever. Hope he's alright.
whoz.ella chapter 22 . 10/27/2015
This story is beautifull...
Thank you
SlashLover chapter 22 . 3/20/2015
I love the "clicks and grunts" comment in this chapter. Hilarious.

Wonderful story. Great mixture of angst and happiness.

Thanks for sharing your story. It was excellent.
SlashLover chapter 20 . 3/20/2015
Lol at "It's a doorway, Fynn, not a time machine."
chibikodo chapter 22 . 1/5/2014
I like how it ends with their meeting for a first date(is that even what it's called?).

The way Fynn comes out to his parents, and the way his family was anticipating it yet not... Their handholding. :) And hey it may not be happily ever after, but that's life. I'll take happy for now.

Thank you for sharing the end of this story with us. Wasn't sure if it would ever be complete a couple years ago so I'm glad you were able to continue on.
Guest chapter 21 . 12/19/2013
I have to say, if after 7 years of reading this you end it with Fynn dying of a heart attack just after they get back together I'll be pissed as fuck.
chibikodo chapter 21 . 12/15/2013
What has Ness been teaching Mickey? Haha She's a cutie.

It's curious to see this Fynn that is similar to yet a shadow of his former self (the self that Lucas loved). Carla was quite insightful... And quite right. :)
JtheChosen1 chapter 21 . 12/13/2013
Once you post the final chapter, I'm going to have to re-read the whole series again. It'll probably make me laugh, cry and display other random emotions but it'll be worth it.

Great job as always!
borderlinecrazy chapter 21 . 12/13/2013
Until Flynn tells his parents, tells them *everything*, including his dispicable two timing and making his lover he'd still had sex just hours before his best man, he'll never deserve a second chance. And, even then, it would only be a chance... fuck up again, and there is no third.
Reena chapter 20 . 11/6/2013
Beautifully written!I just hope both of them find their happiness and hopefully in each other,even if it doesn't make sense after so many years.
toasting chapter 20 . 10/30/2013
Wow! This chapter was so dynamic and the story progression was perfect. The interaction between the two is so adorable yet strained in a very tense way; it is so completely fitting for their situation. I loved this chapter and thank you for posting!
TinaLouise chapter 20 . 10/20/2013
Um, did you change your screen name?
I had to re-read this story from the beginning, but I enjoyed it just as much the second time through. It's very bittersweet to read because it's so much like my life. Except I didn't get a happy ending. I hope Fynn and Lucas do.
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