Reviews for The Swords Dance
silivrenheled chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
wow. have you ever read the series "The Wheel of Time?" this reminds me of Lan.

It's a very beautiful poem, and I like the way you can apply it to so many "heroic" men.

maybe you'd like my style of writing too- perhaps you'd like "for those who weave the tapestry" or "ascending" those seem to connect to this poem

liriane (I go by liriane, but my username is silivrenheled)
shinco chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
Oh, wow, that "I loved you" really struck me. This man seemed to be so gentle and innocent and loving, and then he's killing a bunch of people to defend her... dang...