|Reviews for Something Truly Grand|
| Menheret chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
...what is it with you and the improper use of commas? Rhythm sucks too...i looked at a few of ur other poems and they're just as bad! STOP WRITING.
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
I love ho the narration is continually telling a story; the past, the present, the future, just a very dynamic portrait of this scene. Keep up the good work.