| Reviews for i feel your pain |
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   WalkingShadow39 chapter 1 . 7/12/2012 This is good I loved it. |
| toxic-noodle725 chapter 1 . 1/8/2006 hey ur not so bad urself! this poem was very deep. its like one of those love movies. keep it up! :) |
| Rachinchilla chapter 1 . 1/6/2006 o. ) (you took down the story! *evil*) |
| Neaera chapter 1 . 1/5/2006 OMG! NICK! This is making me cry! I'm such a baby... lol. I love the flow, the poem moves perfectly to each line. It reminds me of Romeo and Juliet a bit... Odd, but the sacrifice is romantic. It has such good rythm and your words were simple, but were so effective to cause the reader to feel sorta like they are emotionally with the narator. I expect more wicked poems from you silly! Love it, and honestly, I think this is an improvement from your last poem, but they're both great. Love it! Keep it up huns! |
| AngelQt82217 chapter 1 . 1/5/2006 this is so cute lol! atleast thats the way i see it... But sad that they died...: (... i luv ur poems can't wait to see the next great one! lol!ttyl... |
| free-to-dream15 chapter 1 . 1/5/2006 See? You've got some poetry in you! I liked this one a lot better! I think you could use an adjective to descripe the bullet (like in the first line) but other than that it was pretty good. nice job |