|Reviews for Pierced|
| Drepanididae chapter 42 . 10/10
This was a very good story. It made it seem more realistic that the gods would be prejudiced of humans and see them beneath the gods. It was nice to see those opinions change slowly in Cupid. He was right in the end, Jay was such a prick but poor Bri couldn't see that. But that's love, or at least infatuation for you, it's blind. I loved that scene where Cupid goaded Ares by telling him that he will always be more beautiful and respected and that Aphrodite just sees him as a dalliance. The only thing I would add just to make it even more bashing was that in myth even though Ares was the only male child that Hera conceived with Zeus her husband she never cared of loved Ares and thought that he was a failure and an inept fool. If Cupid said anything about his mother not loving him... well that would have taken the cake. I can't wait to see what Ares has cooked up. He's changing tactics, less war, more charm to seduce Bri (not likely :).
| Guest chapter 28 . 7/16
just tell Cupid, Brit, you stupid girl!
SHE IS SO STUPID!
| Guest chapter 24 . 7/16
God Brit is such a bitch. Jay is obviously using her. I mean, honestly. She's basically nothing more than a high-class slut like Lena.
| WatUCWatIC chapter 42 . 6/18
lol, I kept imagining calliborn when cupid was made out to be an ugly cherub with red eyes...
| Wicked4life chapter 12 . 5/19/2014
Okay im sorry but you've got the story waayyyyy wrong. Are you sure you're not talking about Hesphatus? Cupid chose Psyche solely on looks, because she was the prettiest mortal alive. And once she saw cupid she became awestruck that she married a god. And then she worked her ass off in three (almost) impossible tasks her mother in law gave her.
| AlyssaChu chapter 42 . 4/5/2014
Greatt storyyyy! Great ending! Awsome! Loved every single bit of it.
| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 42 . 2/22/2014
This is such an interesting story! I usually try to find good mythology stories, but it seems they're so few and far between. I just had to change up my way of sorting the story lists, I guess. When I saw Cupid in the summary I immediately thought of the little pudgy guy. I'm so glad I was wrong. I mean, that would just be awkward, if you ask me. A large part of relationships these days is based off appearances for some reason. I really like how you made him out to be though. He and bree are so cute together. Now if only they'd be equals as faar as mortality is concerned . . . I actually loved all the characters. You developed them really well. That's always a huge problem of mine, figuring out just how much planning I need to really get the sense for a character's personality.
Anyway, I'm really looking forward to seeing where this story goes. there's definitely room for a sequel (which I'm about to search for by the way).
Keep up the amazing work! :)
| Ayame Yoshida chapter 22 . 1/9/2014
Ohmygosh! I love Ever After! :D Its definetly one of my favorite chicl flicks! Have you seen The Princess Bride, or A Walk in the Clouds? Both are a lot like Ever After and are just so darn cute!
| Ayame Yoshida chapter 6 . 1/9/2014
Cupid's ignorance and inocence is so funny and adorable!
| R. Ficst chapter 42 . 10/25/2012
Wonderful! Really great work! I thoroughly enjoyed your characters and wonderful storytelling. Can't wait for the sequel!
| caitly chapter 42 . 10/10/2012
I really like this story! I love how you portrayed the Greek Gods, but sort of gave them your own twist. And Bri is really awesome, too. One thing though that I think would really help though is if you read through it again and cleaned up some of the typos and grammatical errors or if you got a beta to help. Your plot is awesome, and I think if it was cleaned up it would flow even better.
I can't remember what chapter it was in to go back and quote it, but I loved when Ares said something along the lines that people should adore not love because then you want to do what is best for them. I love that so so much!
| juju chapter 42 . 8/31/2012
I'm super excited to see the continuation! This was literally the best story I've ever read about Cupid. besides, he is the only personajem mythology that attracts me. I hope the sequel, great story!
| IHeartWritingSoThere chapter 2 . 8/26/2012
So awesome! Keep writing and being amazing :)
| Failisse chapter 42 . 6/3/2012
What a wonderful story! I love how you combined modern day romance with mythology. I've always loved the story of Eros and Psyche, and I think your fic is an interesting spin off of what might have taken place had Psyche and Eros not gotten together. This was a well thought out story and I enjoyed every bit of it. I hope that the next mythology story you write will be a whole other tale of a romance between a human and Hades (because for some reason I've always liked romance with Death as a character). Hope to read more fics like yours!
| jnl94 chapter 26 . 5/16/2012
Well at least she took him with her. He totally deserved it.