|Reviews for Pierced|
| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 42 . 2/22
This is such an interesting story! I usually try to find good mythology stories, but it seems they're so few and far between. I just had to change up my way of sorting the story lists, I guess. When I saw Cupid in the summary I immediately thought of the little pudgy guy. I'm so glad I was wrong. I mean, that would just be awkward, if you ask me. A large part of relationships these days is based off appearances for some reason. I really like how you made him out to be though. He and bree are so cute together. Now if only they'd be equals as faar as mortality is concerned . . . I actually loved all the characters. You developed them really well. That's always a huge problem of mine, figuring out just how much planning I need to really get the sense for a character's personality.
Anyway, I'm really looking forward to seeing where this story goes. there's definitely room for a sequel (which I'm about to search for by the way).
Keep up the amazing work! :)
| Ayame Yoshida chapter 22 . 1/9
Ohmygosh! I love Ever After! :D Its definetly one of my favorite chicl flicks! Have you seen The Princess Bride, or A Walk in the Clouds? Both are a lot like Ever After and are just so darn cute!
| Ayame Yoshida chapter 6 . 1/9
Cupid's ignorance and inocence is so funny and adorable!
| R. Ficst chapter 42 . 10/25/2012
Wonderful! Really great work! I thoroughly enjoyed your characters and wonderful storytelling. Can't wait for the sequel!
| caitly chapter 42 . 10/10/2012
I really like this story! I love how you portrayed the Greek Gods, but sort of gave them your own twist. And Bri is really awesome, too. One thing though that I think would really help though is if you read through it again and cleaned up some of the typos and grammatical errors or if you got a beta to help. Your plot is awesome, and I think if it was cleaned up it would flow even better.
I can't remember what chapter it was in to go back and quote it, but I loved when Ares said something along the lines that people should adore not love because then you want to do what is best for them. I love that so so much!
| juju chapter 42 . 8/31/2012
I'm super excited to see the continuation! This was literally the best story I've ever read about Cupid. besides, he is the only personajem mythology that attracts me. I hope the sequel, great story!
| IHeartWritingSoThere chapter 2 . 8/26/2012
So awesome! Keep writing and being amazing :)
| Failisse chapter 42 . 6/3/2012
What a wonderful story! I love how you combined modern day romance with mythology. I've always loved the story of Eros and Psyche, and I think your fic is an interesting spin off of what might have taken place had Psyche and Eros not gotten together. This was a well thought out story and I enjoyed every bit of it. I hope that the next mythology story you write will be a whole other tale of a romance between a human and Hades (because for some reason I've always liked romance with Death as a character). Hope to read more fics like yours!
| jnl94 chapter 26 . 5/16/2012
Well at least she took him with her. He totally deserved it.
| jnl94 chapter 25 . 5/16/2012
Aw Cupid called her beautiful because he loves her
| jnl94 chapter 24 . 5/16/2012
Aw Bri don't go!
| jnl94 chapter 23 . 5/16/2012
NO. Cupid will come back dang it
| jnl94 chapter 22 . 5/16/2012
Okay ew. Ares is a sick freak
| jnl94 chapter 21 . 5/12/2012
No no no no no no! Don't do it Bri! You should be with Cupid not JAy! Stupid girl!
| jnl94 chapter 20 . 5/12/2012
YAY! They kissed! It was so cute and then he went and ruined it. -sigh- Guys can be such idiots. Even demigods.