Reviews for Pierced
Slate Green chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
Awesome, awesome story! Very convicing. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Aella88 chapter 6 . 1/16/2006
Aw...how sweet. He cleaned her room. And...forgot to move his hands! I think it was him who was behind her in class. *rubs hands gleefully* I think I already sense the budding romance...however...I can't forget that creepy person at the end of the hall...and the mention of Aries.
Bloodflower chapter 6 . 1/16/2006
*snicker* enchanted black box...hehehe...

Damned funny! I'm loving it...though it's still overly disconcerting for me to keep reading that you're referring to Cupid instead of Eros...I always find I identify better with the Greek gods than I do with the Roman ones...but then if you're referring to Cupid shouldn't you be calling Ares Mars?

Just an ickle question...
green flip-flops chapter 6 . 1/16/2006
Very cute! I love your version of Cupid.
Aella88 chapter 5 . 1/15/2006
*is getting impatient* Yay! Now that Cupid is here...she has to fall in love with him! And...as my romantic heart desires, he should fall in love with ehr too! Can't I have a teeny tiny spoiler...*puppy eyes* Pwease!
Aella88 chapter 3 . 1/7/2006
Yay! Exciting and creepy and wonderful! I know Cupid has to be coming up soon and I'm dying to meet him!
Aella88 chapter 4 . 1/7/2006
*grins happily* Yay! Finally! She meets Cupid! I knew it had to be coming up soon after the last chapter. I love this chapter and I really can't wait for the next one! The only detail that I might mention is the spelling in this. Since I know you were having computer problems that's expected, but you might want to check it over. I can send you corrections if you like. I must admit my favorite mistake was when you said that Tish was standing at then end of a long hair instead of hall!
Aella88 chapter 2 . 1/5/2006
Oh! Yay...Sorry if I didn't catch any mistakes you may have made in this chapter and the ones I missed last chapter. I'm a fast reader and when my mind hits mistakes it automatically corrects them in my vision unless it is blaringly obvious. *laughs* It's a pain when we have to correct daily sentences in English. Anyway, I like this chapter. I'm anxiously on the edge of my seat waiting for the appearance of cupid! I'm so glad you updated so soon, and I can't wait until the next update. Also, thanks for reviewing my work. I sent you an email, but it may have arrived in your spam.
Bek chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
This looks really good. Very interesting so far. Dont stop!
Aella88 chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
I just had to read it after I saw the summary. It reminds me a little of Cupid and Psyche. I love old myths and stuff. However...The first chapter was really good! There were one or two spelling errors, but that happens to everyone when you type. I can't wait to read more! I hope you update really soon! I'm especially waitng for her to meet cupid! *big grin*
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