Reviews for Ice Cream Carousel
Violent.Delights chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
I love the symbolism of the carousel, and the way you describe makes it sound kind of...garish, which I like. I feel like I'm on the ride with you. It's god :D
False Pretense chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
Very nice. I like the imagery. Keep writing!

Aarahiti
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
This is really good, I like it. Liked how you used a carousel as the simbol of going in circles with someone you care about, or like in better words. Great work, thanks for the review.
linedstained frameless chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
it's great. I love the way that it paints a picture in your mind, effortlessly. It's awesome and very sullen. But I think it'd be better if you didn't describe the carousel that much. But still, beautiful.
lalalalalla chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
your poem reminds me of kendrick...anyways I really like the idea and I got what you are trying to say...and I can relate (yeah right)...

*muah...