Reviews for Sinner
Aquafied chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
it's touchy

i love it
luv me like no other chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
you should mention this is the parting exchange. they both seem so similar.
the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
how evil & ruthlessly honest. i may love you.
Avide chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
I like this poem. It is what I pretend to be.
classic violet chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
Awesome. So in depth, great job!
The Big Pimpin Pimple chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
heh...I luv this poem it so...(searching for word)...eVEL (not evil) eVEL...
ville de diable chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
Oh. This is actually kind of funny to me because me and a few of my friends have this joke that I own their souls, and I don't have one. One of them gave me a Jif jar and labeled it with their name. I guess it's supposed to be their soul. Haha.

poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
the innocence of a child is rampent in this. it is contagious in every aspect, cute and angsty and haunting(ly perfect). i love it. i love it.


~* noelle
Octello chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
Nice! Very interasting and sort of sad.
a lonely september chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
beautiful. i love the feeling it gives off... very spiritually-wrong-ish... urgh. i can't describe it. but it's nice.
la-mocha chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
Haha, creepy in the most delightful way.
lackluster chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
it has this 'child speaking' aura around it that just makes me smile, but the idea isn't as innocent. wonderful.