Reviews for Lightly
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
This is gorgeous. I love it. All the images paint this beautiful picture of sex and smoke. Mm. That didn't make any sense, but yeah, I love it. Favoriting. Keep writing! :)
a lonely september chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
ohgod. this has got to be one of my favorite pieces i've read. it blows me away. this is getting a favorites. and after the great work i've read from you? you are too. : )
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/4/2006
this is a sweet story... especially the ending... nicely done... less abstraact than usual and still amazing
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
Independence. I like the difference in the message here; it's not one I often see.
Archipelago chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
I had to read it like seven times(no joke) until I got it. I swear I thought she was in the backseat of a car until the seventh read when I got it. Duh me. Great poem though. I'm just tired.
gnimrodd chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
"but

i’d never take it."

hey i think i remember you using a phrase like this before. that's exciting. he. lovely poem bud.

(red t-shirts, anyone?)
wallblossom chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
you captured a moment simply, and without any pretension. good job.
ThisCut-UpAngel chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
Wonderful imagaery!