|Reviews for Broken Machine|
| Scarlet Black chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
This was probably my favorite of your poems, I liked the style of it immensely. I thought it was strong all the way through, unlike a lot of poems.
| this is britt chapter 1 . 6/9/2006
weird poetry isn't bad. although I really wouldn't label this as weird. different, perhaps. I am sorry I never got around to reviewing this until right now. but your poetry is unique- it has a definite flavor to it. I like the fact it had some kind of rhythm to it. plus this line It’s Not Broken Anymore- the caps, something there got to me. all right, thank you so much for everything.
| BenevolentShadow chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
Odd... but I really like it. It's nice to read something like this every now and then. (Now and then tends to be alot these days) Anyway, good job.
| run rabbit run chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
this kind of writing is normal for me. breaking the mold is cool. i like this. abstract art almost...
| Herminia chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
Very good. The question marks made it all the more effective. Kudos!