Reviews for Smoke
Needa S chapter 1 . 2/13/2006
Great write. You are good at writing Haiku's. Keep up the awesome work.
Infection chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
this was good.
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
creeps, like fire... love the ascending rhyme in the first line and the choke at the end of it, very reflective of the content. swish!
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
Well discribed.