|Reviews for Smoke|
| Needa S chapter 1 . 2/13/2006
Great write. You are good at writing Haiku's. Keep up the awesome work.
| Infection chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
this was good.
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
creeps, like fire... love the ascending rhyme in the first line and the choke at the end of it, very reflective of the content. swish!
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 1/6/2006