Reviews for Today Forever
wildwolffree17 chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
The first two verses don't really mesh with the rest of the poem. They are stunning-not to say the rest isn't good, but they are the best.
gabi chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
kit feral chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
What a pretty start! It's beautiful. "impaled on star-broken clich├ęs" That's just melt in my mouth. I adore it. I loved the teen angst stanza. Wonderful. And I just lovelovelove the ending. What a fantastic emotional poem! I adore it. _ Never stop writing!
trees and whatnot chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
I liked this poem quite a bit. You used a little alliteration, which always helps when a rhyme scheme is not used.

I feel the first half is the strongest, though.

Very creative, to say the least!
forsakensmile chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
Brilliant. Very intimate.
Jezsh chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
beautiful work, so personal and so honest.