Reviews for La Belle Dame sans Merci
Ivi chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
hey, Im quite interested to see where you go with this. I like how you use first person, especially since you are writing from the side that most dont, the "evil" side, especially since she is trying to justify herself. The only thing i would change is the lack of...communication, right now it is like Lady Deathstrike, or La Belle is talking to thin air, i think it would work well if you had this be like the first entry to her diary or a letter or something...anyways liked it lots, i will be looking for more