Reviews for Ridges on Skin
Rubyme chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
I love have you have side notes in parenthesis.
bleed gilead chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
i love the phrase "fishhooks in skin" and "milky gold stretched thin". but your ending paradox- healed scars/"still ridges on my skin"- it could be a bit clearer?
inferno tempest chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
good imagery
sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
nicely done. especially enjoyed fish hooks in skin. good imagery.
Azlyn Nicole chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
omg. I love it. I know what you mean. Read my emo poem.