another heartfelt poem about Jesus Christ. may you and He continue to stay together forever and always. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

The composition seemed a little stilted in parts, like you had to reach for words that rhymed (because I know your vocab is very extensive and you could have used better words to convey the same), I assume that would be because it was for school and had to follow a formula. However, that being said, I loved the topic and a couple key points really made me think. For instance, you referring to Jesus as a hero, we rarely hear that title given to him nowadays. I like it-brings forth images of gallantry, nobility, white horse, mighty sword etc. Good job.-searchlight

Well stated. Beautifully done. God Bless ya.

Hey, I love it! So, you're a Christian Poet as well? I have a few poems, but, unfortunately, I could only find one of my best to post on my page. Anyway, excellent work! I hope to read more from you.

Check my poem "Message", I think you'll like it.