nice rhythmn! kinda weird at times, but overall very nice rhythmn. I especially liked all the... the... the.. wat do you call it? "impossible is nothing... all chewed out." parts like that.

other then the language, i really liked the topic and the thoughts.. kinda could relate. overall nice poem _

Ooh I do like the pace and the language sounds used. Though I did get confused by the rhythm where you put the full stops.

-Gloves - a critical one