Reviews for Midnight Confession Just Four Hours Late
z3120 chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
nice rhythmn! kinda weird at times, but overall very nice rhythmn. I especially liked all the... the... the.. wat do you call it? "impossible is nothing... all chewed out." parts like that.

other then the language, i really liked the topic and the thoughts.. kinda could relate. overall nice poem _
Deleted Account 525 chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
Ooh I do like the pace and the language sounds used. Though I did get confused by the rhythm where you put the full stops.

-Gloves - a critical one