Reviews for The Broken Hollow
hyaci chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
Uwaaa so cute!
Wisher chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
One of the best I've ever read. This must be like the fourth time I reread it. Keep loving it.
lightXdarkness chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
I loved the intensity of the story. It was a well written read and one that I have no complaints to say. I give four thumbs up because this story really did deserve it. In a way, it was perfect. You are certainly a good writer! Awesome job with this story. :D
Veneya chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
wow - that was amazing!
i loved it!
GerardtheMoose chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Really good story! It was such a good idea, so well developped. I've always liked mazes... on paper! This one sounds scary.
It was a great surprire that Aedelin was in fact the king. I hope they spend the rest of ther lives together :D
WE'RE SORRY YOUR CALL CANNOT chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
I adore this. I really do. I'm such a great fan of stories about kingdoms and such, and this was so well-written and well-rounded... I absolutely adore it. It comes to a nice close, in my opinion. Very well done.
anydayanywhere chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
This story was really amazing! I really liked how you concluded the story. It left me satisfied. :D
lost in pale blue chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
I really enjoyed this. It's a well-crafted story with awesome detail. I didn't see the twist at all, so bravo :) And the ending is very sweet.
saxybabe352 chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
HOLLY SHIT! This is the best written story I've ever read on here and I've read quite a few! You had me rivited from begining to end! I seriously respect you.

Megan R Bowen
purplehost chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Ah, how cute. Your plot took a unique idea and executed it perfectly. just the right amount of detail, and it didn't rely on dialogue too much.
theauthor94 chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
That was amazing!

And what a twist! I LOVED IT!

I say that a lot, I am sorry if it annoys you or anything...
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DeviWan chapter 1 . 5/14/2010

...truly amazing...

that was like, a work of art! I really got scared when I was reading about the part of the Broken Hollow, but I got so happy when they finally kissed! I'm in love with this story! Thank you so much! You did an amazing job!
Weinerdog of Death and Doom chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
Oh wow. That was adorable, and very well written. Properly formatted, too, which is wonderful. I liked it a lot.
Kaerith chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
This is a great story. (Yay for happy endings!) The plot's good, and I didn't expect the big twist. I also was impressed with the details; specifically, that you described the Royal Guards' armbands and the king's symbol.
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