Reviews for The Broken Hollow |
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![]() ![]() Uwaaa so cute! |
![]() ![]() One of the best I've ever read. This must be like the fourth time I reread it. Keep loving it. |
![]() ![]() I loved the intensity of the story. It was a well written read and one that I have no complaints to say. I give four thumbs up because this story really did deserve it. In a way, it was perfect. You are certainly a good writer! Awesome job with this story. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow - that was amazing! i loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good story! It was such a good idea, so well developped. I've always liked mazes... on paper! This one sounds scary. It was a great surprire that Aedelin was in fact the king. I hope they spend the rest of ther lives together :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I adore this. I really do. I'm such a great fan of stories about kingdoms and such, and this was so well-written and well-rounded... I absolutely adore it. It comes to a nice close, in my opinion. Very well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was really amazing! I really liked how you concluded the story. It left me satisfied. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this. It's a well-crafted story with awesome detail. I didn't see the twist at all, so bravo :) And the ending is very sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOLLY SHIT! This is the best written story I've ever read on here and I've read quite a few! You had me rivited from begining to end! I seriously respect you. Megan R Bowen |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, how cute. Your plot took a unique idea and executed it perfectly. just the right amount of detail, and it didn't rely on dialogue too much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was amazing! And what a twist! I LOVED IT! I say that a lot, I am sorry if it annoys you or anything... |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ... ...truly amazing... that was like, a work of art! I really got scared when I was reading about the part of the Broken Hollow, but I got so happy when they finally kissed! I'm in love with this story! Thank you so much! You did an amazing job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow. That was adorable, and very well written. Properly formatted, too, which is wonderful. I liked it a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story. (Yay for happy endings!) The plot's good, and I didn't expect the big twist. I also was impressed with the details; specifically, that you described the Royal Guards' armbands and the king's symbol. |